There, that's better. I have that section of Abby done. In the end, I cut a good amount of the confrontation between Goddess and her son. The previous version was horribly melodramatic. This is just painfully melodramatic now.
I just read through the next section. There's some good material to work with there. But it's nearly 6am, and I think I'm about ready for some sleep again...
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